Guidelines
The rulebook for EDesk — positioning, personality, audience, and the lines we don't cross. Hand this page to anyone creating on the brand's behalf.
Positioning
Essence & personality
Values
Audience
Voice rules
Full voice samples live in Voice & MessagingEDesk speaks with the clipped precision of air traffic control — short declarative sentences, active verbs, zero filler. The tone respects the reader's technical fluency and time pressure: we acknowledge complexity honestly, then resolve it with operational clarity, never apologizing for power or dumbing down capability.
Do
- Use sentence-case headlines
- Lead with the operational outcome
- Write like dashboard labels: verb-noun
- Cut every adverb and qualifier
- Address 'you' when giving instruction
- Name the chaos before the solution
Don’t
- Never start with 'In today's…'
- No exclamation marks in body copy
- Avoid 'empower' and 'transform'
- Don't soften with 'just' or 'simply'
- Never use 'seamlessly' or 'effortlessly'
- No questions as headlines
Creative constraints
Don’t
- Visual: Cheerful illustration style with cartoon characters or anthropomorphized objects
- Visual: Abstract connection imagery: network nodes, linking lines, floating orbs
- Visual: Teal-to-purple gradients or any gradient overlays on data visualization
- Visual: Rounded friendly shapes: blob backgrounds, circular containers, soft organic forms
- Visual: Stock photography of diverse teams high-fiving or pointing at screens
- Visual: Glows, shadows, or depth effects that obscure information hierarchy
- Visual: Generic SaaS dashboard mockups with placeholder lorem ipsum data
- Visual: Oversized pull-quote testimonials with circular headshot crops
- Visual: Decorative geometric patterns or abstract background textures
- Visual: Emoji or playful iconography in UI or marketing materials
- Tonal: Aspirational founder-speak: 'empowering', 'transforming', 'revolutionizing'
- Tonal: Corporate jargon: 'synergy', 'leverage', 'best-in-class', 'next-generation'
- Tonal: Minimizing language: 'simply', 'just', 'easily', 'don't worry'
- Tonal: False urgency or FOMO tactics: 'limited time', 'don't miss out', 'act now'
- Tonal: Cheerful exclamation points or overly enthusiastic tone
- Tonal: Self-congratulatory language about awards, funding rounds, or growth metrics
- Tonal: Ironic distance or startup cuteness: puns, winking tone, self-aware meta-commentary
- Tonal: Vague benefit claims without operational specifics: 'better customer experience', 'improved efficiency'
- Tonal: Questions posed to the reader as engagement bait: 'Tired of messy inboxes?'
- Tonal: Tech buzzwords used as credibility signals: 'AI-powered', 'intelligent', 'smart'
EDesk occupies the intersection of high-stakes operational control and attentive service design — these constraints protect against the twin failure modes of looking either like generic cheerful SaaS (which undermines operational seriousness) or impenetrable enterprise software (which contradicts the Caregiver's accessible competence). The visual avoids flatten the brand into 'just another dashboard tool', while the tonal avoids prevent the copy from either patronizing users or hiding behind jargon when clarity is the entire value proposition.